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Name: Megthechef43 (Signed) · Date: 23 Aug 2012 9:27 am · For: The Midnight Games

inordinantlyarticulate,

I hope he comes back. It's clear from her heartbreaking letter that she knows she made a mistake, so I hope he comes back to her. I love how well-written and clearly-thought out your letter/story is. I am not sure if you plan to continue but I hope you do.

Megthechef43



Name: Mangagirl (Signed) · Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:00 am · For: The Midnight Games

This is so, so sweet! Gah, I was almost crying by the end of it! I love your writing style! This is amazing. 10/10

Emma x



Name: Siriuslover177 (Signed) · Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:30 pm · For: The Midnight Games

Oh. My. Goodness.
That was probably one of the best short stories I have ever read in my entire life.
The emotion you used, and the stories you told were, brilliant.
I loved how you wrote this, in letter form, it was a great, and creative way to show this, and I just loved it.
The midnight game, how you described your nights, was amazing, and then when you told us about the crash, my heart broke, I knew right as she dared him, that it was going to happen.
And when they saw the attic, and how it made them fight, that was a very creative way to bring the whole midnight game back in, and the gnome, my goodness, what a great way to use something small you used before hand, and bring it back as a huge part of the ending.
You had me wanting them to get back together at the end so badly, yet you had me torn as if they should, because of the way things changed.
This was a great, great story. Very good job.

~Sarah
Xxx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)



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