Name: Siriuslover177 (Signed) · Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:53 pm · For: Chapter 1

This was interesting, I have never read anything like this before, and I actually really liked it.
I really thought it was creative having the "Number Of Happy Endings" board, I liked that quite a lot(:
And the Prince falling in love with the girl, and the main character saying how it happens all the time, I thought that was very clever, and made me smile.
This was a very creative, different story, I liked it(:


Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you found it original! I thought I might have been trying too hard and that it would come off cheesy :/

Yes, the poor narrator gets really irritated with all the seemingly mindless princes she's had to deal with. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it :)



p.s. you're like my official first reviewer on this site- which automatically makes you special. 



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