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Name: someonetobeproudof (Signed) · Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:11 pm · For: When We Crumble Down

this is so great!!! im hoping that theres gonna be some kind of resistance hiding in the woods that will help esther and gabe and  freesia take down the LGPOs!!! i mean im fine anywhere ur story goes...something different wud be great too... ur great!!! please write more!~



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this kind review! I'm glad you liked it. However, my lips are sealed to what happens next. ;)



Name: someonetobeproudof (Signed) · Date: 29 Aug 2012 10:14 pm · For: Imprisonment

AAAAHHHH!!!! I LOVE IT !!! please write more!!! does she wake up in gabe's arms? i hope so! hehehe! please write more soon!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! Emma xx



Name: orderofthephoenix (Signed) · Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:45 pm · For: Belladonna

Ooh, things are getting interesting! I'm intrigued by this little girl and I'm sure there's more to the tale than she told. And what's going to happen to Esther now? Someone must have seen what she did. Looking forward to updates! :)

-Sophia



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, this is where things do start to happen!

Emma x



Name: orderofthephoenix (Signed) · Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:31 pm · For: Life is Dark

Your summary caught my eye so I decided to read the first chapter and I was quickly drawn in. I'm interested in the plot so far and want to see how it progresses. :) The setting and characters remind me of THG a little; I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. You did call Gabe 'Gale' once though. :P I quite like the futuristic names you've chosen and the purpose of Unit. I noticed some spelling/grammar mistakes that if fixed, would greatly add to the quality of the chapter. Perhaps consider requesting a beta on the FC forums? Off to read the next chapter! :) 

-Sophia



Author's Response:

Ah boo, I didn't call Gabe that did I? I was hoping it wouldn't be too much like THG but later on it will be drawn away from that. Thanks for being the first reviewer though!

Emma x



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