i love the story being my first time here i'm a bit nervous you are totally amazing
Wow, this story really connected to me.
My sister had cancer, and this story was very heartbreaking, but then in the end, it was breathtaking.
The emotion you put into this story, it's amazing.
I could find absolutly no spelling errors, or anything that sounded off.
This was a very great pease of writting, I really loved it.