Name: LovelyLion25 (Signed) · Date: 07 Apr 2013 9:47 pm · For: Chapter 1

Lovely first chapter! It hopped around a little but that is jusy because you are srstarting out. You`ll find your chapter flow soon so don't fret. Just believe in yourself and be proud you published something for the world to see

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