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Name: secrets_revealed (Signed) · Date: 01 Nov 2012 8:15 pm · For: Comets, Standoff, Needlepoint, Beneath You, Aftermath

Wow, these were good! I particularly enjoyed beneath you and stand off.
The rhyme scheme was nice as well, so many people try to make there
poem rhyme so much they just use any word that rhymes but your words
fitted, they matched the poem.
I do have one little suggestion, if you made the titles of the poems a little different, like bold or underlined just so it is easier to see were one poem ends and another starts.
Really great job though, adding to favourites! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That's an excellent suggestion about the titles, I'll definitely be making them clearer soon. :)



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