Name: LovelyLion25 (Signed) · Date: 03 Apr 2013 5:21 pm · For: The Night Everything Changed
Great job! I cant wait to see more of this now you have my attention. I like the perspective and the side notes as Aslyn completes her thoughts,,(but they can be a tad distracting sometimes). Anyhow good work and I hope to see more!

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