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Rated: Mature [Reviews - 5]
Returning to her home town of Atlantic City is a gamble for 17 year old Carolena and while she merely wants to find a way to survive high school, old friends and enemies both surface to pull her into a web of deceit, murder and betrayal that only a mobster's daughter could fathom.
Category: Adrenaline, Romance
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 2145 | Read count: 317
Published: 19 Aug 2012 | Updated: 19 Aug 2012 [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved this and can't wait for the next chapter!
It seems like such a simple scene yet I am left with so many questions.
Looking forward to Chapter 2.
Rated: 15+ [Reviews - 2]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: ~)O(~
I really enjoyed this short little romance story. It was vague without being too vague so I got to use my imagination (which I love) but I still felt like I knew what was going on. Apart from a few typos/misspellings the writing was very suitable to the situation, much like the email the guy sent the girl, short and to the point, vague but enough to get the point across.
Thank you. You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me.