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Title: Never Give Up by Gryffin_Duck
Rated: 12+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

"I think you should sit down." 

The phrase sticks out in my mind as the one I heard just before my life changed forever.  But Cody wasn't going to give up and I certainly wasn't either.  From the moment I heard that phrase, I knew we would have to prove the doctors wrong.

 


Category: Poetry
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1902 | Read count: 26384
Published: 10 May 2012 | Updated: 10 May 2012 [Report This]


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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Never Give Up

Wow, this story really connected to me.
My sister had cancer, and this story was very heartbreaking, but then in the end, it was breathtaking.
The emotion you put into this story, it's amazing.
I could find absolutly no spelling errors, or anything that sounded off.
This was a very great pease of writting, I really loved it. 

~Sarah
Xxx



Title: The Midnight Games by inordinatelyarticulate
Rated: 12+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

I wanted to be the mysterious one, the one who couldn't be chained down to anyone or anything. I wanted to disappear in a puff of smoke, leaving heartbreak and sadness in my wake. That was my job. And you took it from me.

 


Category: Romance
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4275 | Read count: 20040
Published: 14 Aug 2012 | Updated: 14 Aug 2012 [Report This]


Reviewer: Siriuslover177 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Midnight Games

Oh. My. Goodness.
That was probably one of the best short stories I have ever read in my entire life.
The emotion you used, and the stories you told were, brilliant.
I loved how you wrote this, in letter form, it was a great, and creative way to show this, and I just loved it.
The midnight game, how you described your nights, was amazing, and then when you told us about the crash, my heart broke, I knew right as she dared him, that it was going to happen.
And when they saw the attic, and how it made them fight, that was a very creative way to bring the whole midnight game back in, and the gnome, my goodness, what a great way to use something small you used before hand, and bring it back as a huge part of the ending.
You had me wanting them to get back together at the end so badly, yet you had me torn as if they should, because of the way things changed.
This was a great, great story. Very good job.

~Sarah
Xxx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)



Title: Prince for Every Occasion by fallen
Rated: 12+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Here at the Fairytale Prince Agency, we've seen enough happy endings to last us a life time. The bad news? we have to keep hiring new Princes and they're surprisingly hard to come by.


Category: Romance
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 774 | Read count: 9550
Published: 15 Aug 2012 | Updated: 15 Aug 2012 [Report This]


Reviewer: Siriuslover177 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was interesting, I have never read anything like this before, and I actually really liked it.
I really thought it was creative having the "Number Of Happy Endings" board, I liked that quite a lot(:
And the Prince falling in love with the girl, and the main character saying how it happens all the time, I thought that was very clever, and made me smile.
This was a very creative, different story, I liked it(:

~Sarah
Xxx



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you found it original! I thought I might have been trying too hard and that it would come off cheesy :/

Yes, the poor narrator gets really irritated with all the seemingly mindless princes she's had to deal with. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it :)

-fallen

 

p.s. you're like my official first reviewer on this site- which automatically makes you special. 

 

 

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