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Rated: 12+ [Reviews - 3]
I wanted to be the mysterious one, the one who couldn't be chained down to anyone or anything. I wanted to disappear in a puff of smoke, leaving heartbreak and sadness in my wake. That was my job. And you took it from me.
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4275 | Read count: 20412
Published: 14 Aug 2012 | Updated: 14 Aug 2012 [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Midnight Games
I hope he comes back. It's clear from her heartbreaking letter that she knows she made a mistake, so I hope he comes back to her. I love how well-written and clearly-thought out your letter/story is. I am not sure if you plan to continue but I hope you do.
Rated: Mature [Reviews - 3]
“How can you kiss me for so many years… and not feel anything?” I asked in my moment of weakness.
“Who says I don’t feel anything?” He said as he leaned in and pressed his lips to mine in my first real kiss. No cameras… no director… no global audience. Just him kissing me and it was… perfection.
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 2808 | Read count: 65
Published: 19 Aug 2012 | Updated: 20 Aug 2012 [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Do It
It's me again! :)
Darn it... I really want to know his reasons. I was sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for his reason and then BAM! Cliffy :'( I digress.
I love Haley and her attitude but what made her want to see Corbin alone if he had made her feel that way after there last time. Why was he in her house? Did he just know she actually had real feelings for him. (I'm just taking a shot in the dark with that one.) I love the back story on her father and how much he meant to her. It is really sweet.
Corbin is great. I had chills when he whispered in her ear at the party. Though my original mental picture of him was Oliver from Smallville. (that's because I'm a Smallville addict and Olie is the playboy.) Tall, dark and handsome(?) also works well.
I can't wait to read about his reasoning for her not to get married.